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    Default *Naye Likhnay Walon Keliye Anmool Tohfa*

    Adaab Dosto


    Shairy ke baray mein kuch maloomat mien idher post kar raha hon, umeed hai iss se aap kafi madaad hasil kar sakien gay , aur mujhe yaqeen hai ke yeh maloomat aap sab ke liye kafi soudmand sabit hon ge.



    SHAIR

    Shair Ka Lafz "Shaoor" Say Nikla Hai Jis Kay Maani Hain, "Jaan'na" Ya "Samajh Laina". Is Ka Matlab Yeh Hua Kay Jo Baat Shair Mein kahi Jaati hai Uska Taaluq Birah-e-Raast Shaoor Say Hai, Jis Kay Zariay Shair Samjha Jata Hai. Goya Shair Insaani Jazbaat ka Woh Khoobsurat Izhaar Hai Jo Insaani Shaoor ko Mutaasir Karta Hai.

    Misra

    Shair Kay Aadhay Hissay Ko Misra Kehtay Hain, Jaisay

    Apni Daastan Keh Kay Nahin Rotay Hum,

    Misra' Kay Lafzi Maani hain "Darwazay Ka Aik Takhta Ya Kawaarr".Jis Tarha Do Takhtay Ya Kawaarr Jorr Kar Aik Darwaaza Banta Hai, Issi tarha Do Misron' ko Jorr Kar Aik Shair Banta Hai, Jaisay

    Apni Daastan Keh Kay Nahin Rotay Hum
    Yeh Jo Ashk Bahay Hain,Tu Yaad Aaya Ho Ga

    Bait


    Jis Shair Kay Donon' Misray Hum-Kaafia Hon, Usay Bait Kehtay Hain, Jaisay

    Kaisay Kaisay Mosam-e-Gul Mein Khalal Daalay Ga'ay
    Jitnay Gul Jaan-e-Chaman Thay Sab Masal Daalay Ga'ay

    Fard

    Kisi Shaa'ir Ka Aisa Shair Jo Tanha Ho, Yaani Kisi Nazm,Ghazal Qasida Ya Masnavi Ka Juzv(part) na Ho, Usay Fard Kehtay Hain. Is Shair Kay Donon' misron' Ka Hum-Qaafia Hona Zaruri Nahin.Jaisay,

    Kaash Itni To Roshni Hoti
    Apnay Sa'ay Say Guftagu Kartay
    &
    Ab Kay Hum Bikhray To Khushbu Mehkay Gi
    Bauhat Kaanton Mein Hum Nay Din Kaatay Hain

    Aisay Mutafariq Aur Mufrid Ashaar, Shaa'ir Kay Divaan Mein Aksar "Fardiyaat" kay Unwaan Say Darj Hotay Hain.

    SHAIRIE ISTALAHAAT

    (Shair-o-Shairey Mein Istamaal Honay Waalay Makhsoos Ilfaaz)

    Qafia


    Qafia Kay Lughvi(Lafzi) Maani Hain "Peechay Aanay Wala". Shair-o-Shairey Mei un Ham-Aawaz Or Hum-Wazan Ilfaaz Ko Qaafia Kaha Jata Hai Jo Ghazal Or Paband Nazm Mein Radeef (Hum-Shakal Ilfaaz) Say Pehlay Aatay Hain.
    Agar Shair Mein Radeef Mojud Na Ho To Aakhir Mein Aanay Waalay Hum-Awaaz Ilfaaz Ki Surat Mein Qaafia Mojud Hota Hai.

    Radeef


    Radeef Kay Lughvi Maani Hain "Woh Shakhs Jo Ghorray Ya Oont Waghira Per kisi Sawaar Kay Peechay Baithay"
    Adab Ya Shair-o-Shairey Ki Istalah Mein Radeef Say Muraad Woh Hum-Shakal Ya Mustakil Ilfaaz Hain Jo Ghazal Ya Nazm Mein Qafiay Kay Baad Hoo-Bahoo Dohra'ay (Repeat Kiay ) Jaatay Hain.
    Jaisay Yeh Ghazlia Ashaar Mulaahiza Farmaa'iay,

    Asar Us Ko Zara Nahin Hota
    Ranj Rahat Faza Nahin Hota

    Tum Hamaray Kisi Tarha Na Huay
    Warna Dunya Mein Kia Nahin Hota

    Tum Mairay Paas Hotay Ho Goya
    Jab koi Dusra Nahin Hota

    Kuon Sunay Arz-e-Muztarib Momin
    Sanam Aakhir KHUDA Nahin Hota

    Is Ghazal Mein Zara,Faza,Kia,Dusra Or KHUDA, Yeh Sab Qaafiay Hain.
    Jabkay "Nahin Hota" Radeef Kay Tor Per Istamaal Hua Hai.

    NOTE:-

    Shair Likhtay Huay Hum Aksar Radeef Ka To Khayaal Rakhtay Hain Magar Qaafiay Ka Nahin.Yaad Rakhain Kay Kisi Bhi Ghazal Mein Radeef Ka Hona Lazmi Nahin Magar Qaafiay Ka Hona Lazmi Hai.
    Is Kay Ilaava Yeh Kay Qaafiay Ka Khayaal Na Rakhnay Say Nazm Ya Ghazal Be-Wazn Ho Jati Hai Laikin Agar Qaafiay Ka Khayaal Rakha Ja'ay To Shair Mein Tawazun Or Khubsurati Paida Hoti Hai.

    *Information: Jis Ghazal Mein Radeef Istamaal Ho Usay "Muraddaf Ghazal" Kehtay Hain Or Jis Ghazal Mein Radeef Istamaal Na Ho Usay "Ghair-Muraddaf Ghazal" Kehtay Hain.

    Matla

    "Matla" Kay Lughvi Maani "Talu Honay Ki Jaga" Kay Hain.
    Adabi Istalah Mein Ghazal Aur Qaseeday Kay Pehlay Shair Ko Jis kay Donon' Misray Hum-Qafia Or Hum-Radeef Hotay Hain, Matla Kaha Jaata Hai.

    Misaal:


    Ibn-e-Maryam Hua Karay Koi
    Meray Dard Ki Dawa Karay Koi

    NOTE:-


    YAAD RAHAY! Agar Ghazal Kay Pehlay Shair Kay Donon Misray Hum-Kaafia Na Hon To Usay Matla Nahin Kehtay Balkay Sirf Ghazal Ka Pehla Shair Kehtay Hain.

    Makta

    "Makta" Kay Lughvi Maani Hain "Katt Jaanay Ki Jaga".
    Istalaahi Tor Per Ghazal Or Qasiday Kay Aakhri Shair Ko, Jis Mein Sha'ir Apna Takhallus Ya Mukhtasir Adbi Naam Istamaal Karta Hai, Usay MAKTA Kehtay Hain.Jaisay,

    Kaabay Kis Munh Say Jaao ** Ghalib
    Sharm Tum Ko Magar Nahin Aati

    NOTE:- Agar Aakhri Shair Mein Sha'ir Apna Takhallus Istamal Na Karay To Usay Makta Nahin Kahain ** Balkay Sirf Aakhri Shair Kahain **.


    SHAIR KI HAIYYAT (Forms)

    Ghazal


    Ghazal Kay Lafzi Maani Hain "Guftagu Karna (Aurton Say)". ....Waisay Aik Ravayat Yeh Bhi Hai Kay, Agar Aik Hiran Ko Chaaron' Taraf Say Darindon Nay Ghair Rakha Ho Or Usay Apnay Bachnay Ki Koi Surat Nazar Na Aa'ay Or Darinday Ichaanak Us Per Hamla Kar Dain....To Aisi Surat Mein Hiran Kay Munh Say Jo Be-Basi Ki Aawaaz Nikalti Hai Usay "Ghazal" Kehtay Hain.
    Ghazal Mein Kam Az Kam 5 Ashaar Ka Hona Zaruri Hai. Ghazal Ka Har Shair Infradi (Individual) Haisiat Rakhta Hai. Har Shair Mein Mukhtalif Mazmoon Biaan Kia Ja Sakta Hai.

    Nazm


    Nazm Kay Lafzi Maani Hain "Moteon' Ko Dhagay Mein Parona"/ "Tarteeb".
    Istalaahi Maanon' Mein Nazm Say Muraad Aik Tarha Ka Kalaam-e-Mozun' Ya Aisay Ashaar Ka Majmua Hai Jin Sab Mein Aik Hi Mazmoon Biyaan Kia Ja'ay.

    Masnavi


    Aisa Kalaam Jis Mein Har Shair Ka Kaafia Or Radeef Alag Alag Ho.Jaisay,

    Mein Sochta Rehta Hun Yunhi
    Aakhir Yeh Tafaawat Kia Maani
    Yeh Soch Ajab Tarrpaati Hai
    Aankhon Mein Nami Bhar Jaati Hai
    Phir Mujh Say Dil Yeh Kehta Hai
    Maazi Ko Tu Rota Rehta Hai
    Kuch Aahain Dabi Si rehnay Day
    Kuch Aansu Baaqi Rehnay Day
    Yeh Haal Bhi Maazi Hona Hai
    Is Per Bhi Tujhay Kuch Rona Hai

    Kasida

    Aisi Nazm Jo Kisi Dunyaavi Jah-o-Jalaal Ki Haamil Shakhsiyatt Ki Tareef Mein likhi Ja'ay Usay Kasida Kehtay Hain.

    Marsiya


    Aisi Nazm Jo Kisi Ki Wafaat/Inteqaal Per Izhaar-e-Afsos Kay Liay Likhi Ja'ay Usay Marsiya Kehtay Hain.


    SHAIR KI SAAKHT/BANAWATT

    2 Misray

    Aik Shair Banta Hai.

    3 Misray

    "Sih-Harfi"/"Hyco" Banti Hai. Yeh Japanese Tarz Hai.Punjabi Mein Is Tarz Ka Kalaam "Maahiay" Ya "Dohrray" Kay Naam Say Mojud Hai. Urdu Mein Bhi Is Tarz Per Shairey Ki Gai Hai. Jaisay,

    Baaghon Mein Parray Jhulay
    Tum Hum Ko Bhool Ga'ay
    Hum Tum Ko Nahin Bhulay

    4 Misray (2 Shair)

    Aik Qata' Ya Rubaai Banti Hai.
    Agar Sirf Chaar Misray Hi Hon Or Un Chaaron mein Aik Hi Mazmoon Ho To Usay Rubaai* Kahain **.
    Agar Charon Misron'(Donon' Shairon') Mein Mukhtalif Baat Ki Gai Ho To Usay Qata Kehtay Hain.

    *Information:
    Rubaai Chaar Misron ki Aisi Nazm Ko Kehtay Hain Jis Ka Pehla, Dusra Or Chotha Misra Hum-Qaafia Ho.

    5 Misray

    Aik "Makhmas" Banti Hai. Is Mein 5 Misron Ka Aik Bandd Hota Hai. Jaisay,

    Lagtay Hain Kuch Sochnay Jab Shajar Sar-e-Shaam
    Nikal Jaatay Hain Hum Bhi Udhar Sar-e-Shaam
    Shab Aati Hai Phir Utar Sar-e-Shaam
    Sitaaray Jaatay Hain Jab Bikhar Sar-e-Shaam
    Hum Tumhain Yaad Kartay Hain

    6 Misray (3 Shair)


    "Musaddas" Banti Hai. Is Mein 6 Misron Ka Aik Bandd Hota Hai.
    MUSADDAS-E-HAALI (Madd-O-Jazr-E-*****) Isi Tarz Mein Likhi Gai Hai.


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    wah jaani buhat buhat shukriya... thanks Keeeep It UP

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    Good Work yaar bht hi achi thread hai good , bht hi munfarid

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    nice boht acha maza a gya yaar

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    Nice Guideline Bad boy

    Nice efforts

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    Bhoot he Umdaa doost bhoot khoob lagay rahoo

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    boss hila dala apne

    kya bat hai great work

    soch raha hon ke aik 2 ghazlain islah kerwane ke lye ab apke pas bhej don

    very good bro
    thanks for information

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    Dear Itni Useful Information dene ka boht boht Shukriya. Is se Boht Kuch Seekhne Ka Moqa Mila hai Again Thanks For Sharing
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    Thanks admin, mera aik sawal hai kay wasay to urdu shayari ka section hai agar sindhi kay mashoor shayar "noor nabi mir" shikar pori ka kalam urdu main un kay betay se convert kara kar yahan post karna chahta hoon.jin ka naam talib hussain hai.jin ki khuwahish hai kay un kay walid ka kalam shaya ho.

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